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post Dec 30 2008, 08:01 PM
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Disfal the Nightcrawler by GVS aka _bb_

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CHANGE LOG:
12/31/2008 - Hero created
12/31/2008 - Added the Story, Hero Combos, Synergies, and Items(2:00PM here in Philippines)

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INTRODUCTION

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Summon Nightcrawler

Disfar is came from the tribe of the Murlocs from the lands of Felwood. The Undead Legions conquered their habitats and turned them into bases. The nightcrawler is the only one who have escaped in the terror of the lich king's army. He joined the Sentinel for him to have revenge on the death of his tribe and family. The nightcrawler can turn invisible when night, allowing him to spy his enemies. He can throw flashbangs in a certain range to blind his enemies and prevent them from attacking. The Scourge shall know the true anger of the Nightcrawler.

Strength - 17 +2.00
Agility - 24 +2.80(Main Attribute)
Intelligence - 18 +1.55

Learns Nightclawler's Flashbang, Corrosive Scales, Night Crawl and Death Stab

Attack range of 100
Movement speed of 300

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HERO INFORMATION


Alliance: Sentinel
Theme: Nightcrawlers
Role: Killer

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Disfal, the Nightcrawler

Starting Hitpoints:= 150 + (Strength * 19); 150 + (17 * 19) = 473
Starting Mana:= Intelligence * 13; 18 * 13 = 234
Starting Damage: 39-50
Starting Armor:=Agility/7; 24/7 = 3.4

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HERO ABILITIES

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Nightcrawler's Flashbang

The night crawler will throws a flashbang in an area to damage, slow enemy units by 35% and to prevent them from attacking. The flashbang last for 2.5 seconds.

Level 1 - Deals 120 damage and has a 200 AOE.
Level 2 - Deals 200 damage and has a 240 AOE.
Level 3 - Deals 280 damage and has a 270 AOE.
Level 4 - Deals 330 damage and has a 300 AOE.

Cooldown: 30 seconds
Mana cost: 100/110/120/130

The casting time is 1 second.
The casting range is 400


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Corrosive Scales


Allows the Nightcrawler to be scaly. Gives a chance to reflect the percentage of the received damage of the nightcrawler in an area near him.

Level 1 - 10% chance to reflect the 120% of the nightcrawler's received damage.
Level 2 - 10% chance to reflect the 150% of the nightcrawler's received damage.
Level 3 - 10% chance to reflect the 180% of the nightcrawler's received damage.
Level 4 - 10% chance to reflect the 200% of the nightcrawler's received damage.

Passive

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Night Crawl

The nightcrawler will become permanently invisible when night. The invisible will removed when the nightcrawler attacks, use a skill or when day comes.

Level 1 - The nightcrawler becomes invisible when night. Has 8 seconds fade time.
Level 2 - The nightcrawler becomes invisible when night. Has 7 seconds fade time.
Level 3 - The nightcrawler becomes invisible when night. Has 6 seconds fade time.
Level 4 - The nightcrawler becomes invisible when night. Has 5 seconds fade time.

Passive

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Death Stab


When the nightcrawler attacks in front it will deal a bonus damage but when it attacks from the rear, the attacked one will be slowed by 30%.

Level 1 - adds a bonus 25% of damage.
Level 2 - adds a bonus 50% of damage.
Level 3 - adds a bonus 75% of damage.

Orb Effects do not stack

Hero Combo
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When you are invisible can easily use the skill, Nightcrawler's Flasbang to your enemies.
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Flashbang can slow and prevent the attack of enemies. In this state, you can deal a bonus damage when you attack in front.

Hero Synergies
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Best Allies:
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The ultimate of Balanar can make the Nightcrawler permanently invisible.
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Rikimaru can use his smoke screen followed by the nightcrawler's flashbang
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While Disfar is invisible, Ish'kafel can buff him the ion shell so that he can purely damage enemies.

Prone to:
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When Balanar use the Darkness, he can never see the nightcrawler. Disfar can flee from the rage of Balanar.

Worst Enemies:
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Rooftrellen can see invisible units.

Hero Items
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This is for IAS
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For Disfar to have a life steal. Disfar cannot wield items which have orb effects.
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You can damage units near you per second.
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For enemies to have no escape.
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This is for increase agility and for to have evasion.




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post Jan 2 2009, 07:21 AM
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Hm, its like a Rikimaru, just with much more style.

"The night crawler will throws a flashbang in an area to damage, slow enemy units by 35% and to prevent them from attacking. The flashbang last for 2.5 seconds.

Level 1 - Deals 120 damage and has a 200 AOE.
Level 2 - Deals 200 damage and has a 240 AOE.
Level 3 - Deals 280 damage and has a 270 AOE.
Level 4 - Deals 330 damage and has a 300 AOE.

Cooldown: 30 seconds
Mana cost: 100/110/120/130"


I think we can make the dmg like 100/130/200/270 and the skills should last 1,5/2/2,5/3 seconds ans the Cooldown 30/25/20/15 and the AOE 300/300/300/300

"Corrosive Scales

Allows the Nightcrawler to be scaly. Gives a chance to reflect the percentage of the received damage of the nightcrawler in an area near him.

Level 1 - 10% chance to reflect the 120% of the nightcrawler's received damage.
Level 2 - 10% chance to reflect the 150% of the nightcrawler's received damage.
Level 3 - 10% chance to reflect the 180% of the nightcrawler's received damage.
Level 4 - 10% chance to reflect the 200% of the nightcrawler's received damage."


Maybe give him a bigger change like 15%

"Night Crawl

The nightcrawler will become permanently invisible when night. The invisible will removed when the nightcrawler attacks, use a skill or when day comes.

Level 1 - The nightcrawler becomes invisible when night. Has 8 seconds fade time.
Level 2 - The nightcrawler becomes invisible when night. Has 7 seconds fade time.
Level 3 - The nightcrawler becomes invisible when night. Has 6 seconds fade time.
Level 4 - The nightcrawler becomes invisible when night. Has 5 seconds fade time."


Mhh, i think its an nice skill, but i think that it has a fade time like 6.5/5.5/4.5/3.5

"Death Stab

When the nightcrawler attacks in front it will deal a bonus damage but when it attacks from the rear, the attacked one will be slowed by 30%.

Level 1 - adds a bonus 25% of damage.
Level 2 - adds a bonus 50% of damage.
Level 3 - adds a bonus 75% of damage.

Orb Effects do not stack"


Thats his bread and butter Skill, but a bit to powerd I think, if you face an enemy he will gain high dmg, if he runs he will be slowed. Maybe Lower the dmg a bit, but replace the orb. An other idea is 20/40/60 % dmg and a 3/6/9 Armor reduce, if you are attacking at the rear a 20% slow and u get 20% MS


All in all, I think its like SA but nice idea

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post Nov 10 2009, 07:13 PM
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Corrosive Scales = aoe whatever. Old spec much?

Proc a laguna blade or a pa crit.. boom 2k damage aoe.
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post Nov 11 2009, 11:14 AM
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Congrats, your hero getting implemented!
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this isnt the hero being implemented, use your BRAINS people; this guy here is trash
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post Nov 11 2009, 03:36 PM
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tup.gif hoho, congrats.


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post Nov 12 2009, 01:18 AM
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This is quite OBVIOUSLY not the hero being implemented. Plus all the suggestions on DA forums are no longer looked at by icefrog.
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post Nov 12 2009, 01:40 AM
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This hero uses pretty much a variation of different skills ranging from

- Riki's ult
- NS at night time
- Spectre/Centaur
- Mortred

The only unique spell would be the first one and it's completely Overpowered.

Basically the whole hero is OP
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post Nov 12 2009, 04:10 AM
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QUOTE(Adi_Nemesis @ Nov 12 2009, 04:18 AM) *

This is quite OBVIOUSLY not the hero being implemented. Plus all the suggestions on DA forums are no longer looked at by icefrog.

This was posted in 2008, he probably took the concept, and remade it, the boycott was RECENTLY so gg, this could be the new hero. Its a long shot but it might just be it. The spells are very similiar to the video.
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post Nov 12 2009, 07:37 AM
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QUOTE(Idontlikedota @ Nov 12 2009, 07:10 AM) *

This was posted in 2008, he probably took the concept, and remade it, the boycott was RECENTLY so gg, this could be the new hero. Its a long shot but it might just be it. The spells are very similiar to the video.

You sir are a retard.
The ONLY spell that 'COULD' be called similar is the nighttime invisibility.
however obviously in the video, he is invisible while attacking. in addition to that all his other spells seen, (the lightning bold and the weird hp loss while being chased by cloud) are nowhere close to matching the description of the OP's hero.

lastly icefrog tends to make pretty complex heroes as of late, the hero suggested by OP is quite dull, boring, simple and overpowered. the spells have little synergy and the idea itself is quite bald. So like i said, it is quite obvious the heroes are not the same.
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post Nov 12 2009, 02:49 PM
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Anyone considering that the lightening bolt and the slow effect might be Orb effects from S&y and Maelstrom ? ;]

If this hero is on 6.65 Its been remade i suppose. ;]

Maybe even the only thing left is the name ;]
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Essentially what you have created is a Rikimaru/Spectre Hybrid. Flashbang is just a generic nuke/slow. Corrosive scales is basically exactly the same as Dispersion; you have a 1/10 chance to reflect 200% damage, on average you will block 20% of each hit you take, the potential for it to kill enemies is much higher though since it can reflect the full damage of an ultimate ability back on its caster. Night Crawl is Rikimaru's skill with a longer fade time and only at night. And his ult is backstab with a slow when hitting in the front. Essentially this is useless because you don't need a slow when the opponent is facing you (generally).

This hero has no originality or synergy, I suggest a remake of all skills.
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QUOTE(Adi_Nemesis @ Nov 12 2009, 10:37 AM) *

You sir are a retard.
The ONLY spell that 'COULD' be called similar is the nighttime invisibility.
however obviously in the video, he is invisible while attacking. in addition to that all his other spells seen, (the lightning bold and the weird hp loss while being chased by cloud) are nowhere close to matching the description of the OP's hero.

lastly icefrog tends to make pretty complex heroes as of late, the hero suggested by OP is quite dull, boring, simple and overpowered. the spells have little synergy and the idea itself is quite bald. So like i said, it is quite obvious the heroes are not the same.


You sir don't know how to read. I stated it was "remade." The theme could have been taken from this, so you sir gtfo.

EDIT: I also stated that he might have took the concept sir. You read MATCHING DESCRIPTION, I said "REMADE"

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QUOTE(Idontlikedota @ Nov 12 2009, 07:10 AM) *

The spells are very similiar to the video.

That line speaks for itself. Go figure
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umm, as far as i can tell, the maim and cl, are both present to show they are item orbs, and not skills, and the proc chances seem to match the actuall item.

i doupt that at the end he dies, the smoke might only apper if he att sumeting/gets near a enemy hero i guess, or moves?

though it looks more like a riki remake than a new hero, which would also explain the similarities (few if any) to this hero, as this is practically just a riki variant. the name i guess pure coincidence, as its not in any way creative.
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errrr.. imagine mortred crits this guy at 1k dmg.. mortred will kill himeslf if it gets reflected.. that is way imba.
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only the Name and potentially Model got implemented
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